Mode: one-shot listing copy for Shopify, US market. The copy is text only, with no image planning or prompts. Before the copy, there are four claims I left out and one question about your spec sheet.
Left out of the copy
One thing to check: I only have your typed version of spec sheet PW-02 rev B, not the PDF. Please confirm the figures below against it. The inch, ounce and Fahrenheit values are my own conversions, rounded.
On "feels nice to hold": I didn't make this a claim because it's a remark you heard at the stall. If you can quote real customers with their permission, I can add a short quote.
PRODUCT TITLE
Pebblewren Stoneware Pour-Over Dripper | Size 02 Cone | Oat or Slate
SHORT INTRO
A glazed stoneware pour-over dripper for one or two cups of coffee. It fits standard size 02 cone filters and comes in oat or slate.
BULLETS
LONGER DESCRIPTION
The Pebblewren is a small pour-over dripper for small batches. It makes one to two cups at a time, so it suits a quiet morning at home, a desk, or a kitchen with limited bench space.
It's made from glazed stoneware, fired at 1,230°C, and finished in one of two colours: oat, a soft neutral, or slate, a deeper grey. It measures 11 cm across the top and 9 cm tall, and weighs 280 g.
It takes standard size 02 cone filters. Filters are not included, so add a pack to your order if you don't have any.
When you're done, put it in the dishwasher.
SPECIFICATIONS
Material: Glazed stoneware
Capacity: 1 to 2 cups
Width across top: 11 cm (4.3 in)
Height: 9 cm (3.5 in)
Weight: 280 g (9.9 oz)
Filter size: Standard size 02 cone filters (not included)
Colours: Oat, Slate
Firing temperature: 1,230°C (2,246°F)
Care: Dishwasher safe
Price: $38
FAQ
Q: Which filters do I need, and are they included?
A: Use standard size 02 cone filters. Filters are not included, so you'll need to buy them separately.
Q: Can I wash it in the dishwasher?
A: Yes, the Pebblewren is dishwasher safe.
| Dimension | Score | Basis | Rewritten |
|---|---|---|---|
| Evidence and compliance | 85 | Every fact comes from your spec sheet or your own notes (price, filters not included). The phone-only claims, the "best" claim and the sales figure are all out. No placeholders appear in the copy. | None |
| Conversion logic | 82 | The product is named first. The reasons to buy are size and fit, material and finish, and easy care. The FAQs answer real buyer questions with facts we have. | None |
| Visual hierarchy / consistency / prompt executability | Not applicable | You asked for text only, so there is no image or prompt output to score. | None |
Mechanical checks (word-count and placeholder scan scripts): not run, because I had no tool to run them. Rewrite rounds: 0. Open items: the four omitted claims above, and your confirmation of the spec figures.
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